Title: Emilia Lupin First Year
, Emilia Lupin: year of the WerewolfPerpetrator: MythicalEntitySue-O-Meter:
The first story has a cover of a silhouetted wolf with a big blue moon in the background. The second is a black and white picture of a wolf breathing out misty air.Summary:
“Emilia Jade Lupin was an interesting girl. spunky, music loving, outgoing, but that's probably because she's the daughter of a marauder. join Emilia in her first year where she goes from a quiet home living with just her father to Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry. Oh and did I mention she was a werewolf?
” And… “The first year being- quite intense to say the least- the second generation of Marauders return to Hogwarts for their second year. but their wishes for a normal school year fall on deaf ears. childhood friends re-appear and Emilia's furry problem is in danger of being uncovered. rated T for mild language and mild violence toward the end. THIS IS A SEQUEL TO EMILIA LUPIN FIRST YEAR
Emilia Jade Lupin, Felicity Davenport, Christiansen Ammon, Dominique “domino” Morrison, Michael Rawlings.Species:
She’s a Marauder brat. Specifically, she’s Lupin’s. She’s also the daughter of Ella, who was a metamorphmagus. (Yes Tonks, your role as the one who convinced Lupin to love has been stolen.)Hair:
In regard to Felicity, “The girls white blond hair seemed unusually light, but Emilia knew the girl didn’t color her hair. Long straight blonde hair that went down to her waist and looked slightly windblown.
” It’s also waist length. I think Emilia has a “wavy mop of sandy brown hair
”. She also may be brunette.Eyes:
In regard to Felicity, “Anger, disgust, hatred, curiosity, and loneliness sparkled in her crystal blueish white eyes.
In regard to Felicity, “The girl’s skin was iridescent and glowed with beauty. Her flushed cheeks added to her alluring figure. The skinny yet modest frame of a girl who looked much older than her age waved timidly.” She’s the same age as Harry.Possessions:
She’s copying a lot of things other people did, but butting into the canon where she shouldn’t, but even her mom steals the roles of other characters. There’s not one lick of originality to this one.Connection to Canon:
Chapter one involves Emilia setting loose water jets she bought without her father knowing and letting loose in the house. (Why that would be sold in a magic joke shop, I don’t know. It’s not even remotely funny.) Worse, Lupin, who struggles to hold down a job, is actually fine with her destroying the house. Second chapter, he’s further distracted by her letter arriving. Apparently Felicity already knows she’s a werewolf, but Emilia blurts it out, but treats Felicity like dirt because of it. Worse, she blurts out because Felicity says she hates werewolves. (Sorry, but no. Lupin would have taught her better.) Felicity is supposedly the nasty one calling her afterwards “half-breed scum”. Chapter four is about Madame Malkin’s, is really short, and she knows all about the maraduers. It ends with her seeing Harry talking to Draco. Which is confusing, because the writer then jumps to pretty much doing a rewrite that is longer and covers it even more, but Draco is already knowing he should call her a “filthy half breed”. (Suethor, you do realize being a werewolf isn’t a commonly known thing about people, but that having a Muggle Born parent isn’t always going to be known by kids either?) The rewrite, that’s at least how it seems. Chapter six sees her act like a brat to Lupin by rolling her eyes and calling him Moony.Origin:
She’s Lupin’s daughter. (How Suethor’s don’t get the fact Lupin’s one of the last people to actually have a daughter because of his fear of passing on being a werewolf, I don’t know. It’s pretty much as in books, but Emilia is there. She of coruse gets sorted intoSpecial Abilities:
Emilia was able to make the quidditch team her first year. (Suethor’s, when will you learn that Harry was allowed to be an exception, and that your Mary Sues and Gary Stus would not have the same exception made? She also with her four friends become the “next Marauders”. The writer tries to hard to make Emilia out to be the “ultimate prankster”, but to copy the original group. It’s just a female version. Apparently, werewolves have their super hearing turned on twenty-four seven. (I’m not sure if this is really true.) The writer further changes canon by saying only “some have their wolf side take over.
” No Suethor, it’s all werewolves. Turns out it’s not an all female team, but that she’s the only female. (At least the all female thing was at least somewhat original. Oh, and in their first or second year they’re already becoming animangai, but stealing Harry’s role within canon. Notes: The writer has two series. There is this one, and one for the Avengers. The OC for that one is called Emma Waylon. This Mary Sue honestly drove me nuts. The writer could either be a very young writer who’s not old enough to even have an account, or it could be a writer who hasn’t a clue how much a self-insert can reveal about the writer. Sample: Emilia Lupin sat behind the couch in her living room. The old tan couch made a good hiding spot for the young girl. Emilia had a plan. She had snuck off to a joke shop a few months ago in diagon alley. While her father was at flourish and blotts she had purchased water jets. For a month and 14 days (of course she was counting) she had hid those powerful water jets under her bed. Today was the day she would finally let them off inside the main level of her house. Why? First, why not? And second, because her muggle Ipod was taken away exactly 5 days and 3 hours ago. It was taken away by Remus because she pulled a prank a lot like this one. But there wasn't much to lose now! And this prank was for good reason! When the water jets are released she would have time to run upstairs. Moony would run downstairs to see what the commotion was, and while he was distracted, Emilia could run upstairs and into his room. She would have just enough time to grab the Ipod from his desk drawer and run. Chances of getting away without getting caught? Slim. maybe she could make up something about an owl flying through and setting something off? She gripped the water jet tightly. This seemed like a good a time as any to out her plan into action. The counted down in her head '3...2...1.. Blast off!' the water jetted out like a rocket! Water instantly soaked everything in sight. Puddles were already forming on the floor! The force of the water was incredible too! Her knuckles were white with the strength she was holding on with. Emilia felt her hands slowly start to slip. Her hands slipped farther and farther down. Emilia tried to re adjust the jet but as soon a one hand let go the jet took off! It went flying around the room, crashing and breaking everything in it's path.